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Friday, September 3, 2021
My Amazing Amusement Park!
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Kia ora Stella, I would really love to come to your amusement park 'My Wonder' please! Can you give me a call when you open ;-)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Stella
ReplyDeletewow Stella this is so cool. I would call my amusement park super savage sisters I would rate yours a 4-5 because you could make the food and rides more interesting. From Caitlin