hi every one i have facts for you on dolphins tack a look and teel me things i can do beter
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, May 7, 2020
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hi every one i have facts for you on dolphins tack a look and teel me things i can do beter
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Great work Stella, your voice is really clear and you don't read too quickly. You have nice titles which help understand what you are reading. For your next one, I would like to see you add in some video footage.
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ReplyDeleteyour work is so GOOD!
your friend Lucy:)